draft+of+essay

=** Here is your writing assignment question: ** =

What kind of society would you build for the future? Name at least two "rules" and give examples, explaining why you think the changes would benefit society. Do not use personal pronouns!

I. First, turn the question into a sentence that attempts to persuade us that YOU have the right idea

Here's an example of a thesis for **an academic paper**:

or this:
 * Jonas' society in The Giver tried to be perfect. Some rules really improved the way people live. //But a few changes would make it even better.//**
 * Sometimes people think rules improve societies and communities. However, rules aren't always the answer. Our society could be improved by offering people more choices.**

II. Once you have your introduction, move on to the supporting paragraphs. Use our List of Ten to get ideas to improve your essay.

Draft is due Thursday, August 27. Rewrite is due Friday. You are only graded on completion for this essay as we will use it to work on our writing.